I totally ripped this
for car ipod action. This is is some filthy shit, dude.
This is another step forward on the path for you. There's not really anything about this song (in reference to the full version) that I can comment on regarding improvement. It's a small departure from the meandering melodies I'm used to, but it still has that nice contrast between ethereal and guttural that I like from your songs so much. I'll be sure to verbally flog you if I hear anything out of place when I play it in the car, but as of right now, it's a 10/10. Congratulations.